2013年6月英语六级考试写作指导（1）
2013年6月英语六级考试写作指导（1）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic More Candidates for Civil Servant. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、 现在有越来越多的大学应届毕业生报考公务员，带来了一定的不利因素;
2、 列举两到三个不利因素加以论述;
3、 你对此有何看法。
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。从提纲可以看出，文章是侧重分析这一现象背后深层次的原因。所以第一段简单阐述大学生报考公务员增多的现象并分析原因;第二段可用论证或是举实例的方法列举其不利因素;第三段提出作者观点或是针对这一现象的负面影响的对策。
【参考范文】
More Candidates for Civil Servant
Nowadays many college graduates apply for civil servant positions. It is true that the positions are ideal in terms of incomes, employment security and respect of others. However, the ever increasing number of applicants doesn't necessarily mean a good thing. The fever for civil servant has Pought some side effects. The side effects are listed as follows:
Firstly, many students apply for the positions for wrong reasons. Some of them apply just because their friends do it or because their parents want them. Some, instead of aiming at serve the people, have the intention of enjoying the interests and power Pought by their future position. Secondly, too many candidates compete for limited positions. Take such hot positions as those in the judicial Panch of government for example, it is estimated that one matriculate is selected out of 200 candidates. More worse, with the flow of most talents to such positions, those positions that are important for social welfare but inferior in personal welfare are left uninterested. This should arouse our deep concern.
For my part, college students should be cautious when deciding whether to apply for the positions. On the one hand, they should not follow others blindly. On the other hand, there are plenty of ways of employment and self-employment, so why crowd on one bus? In a word, the fever should be cooled down.
【点评】
本文属于现象解释型作文。首先通过对当前很多人报考公务员这一现象进行阐释，接着讨论造成这一想像的原因，最后总结全文，表达自己对此的观点。文中精彩词汇包括：apply for，the ever increasing number of，compete for，arouse our deep concern，cooled down。其中句式It is estimated that…;以及疑问句的使用So why crowd on one bus?也成为文章亮点。