2013年12月大学英语六级短文改错习题9
2013年12月大学英语六级短文改错习题9
Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei
Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous1. _______
mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather2. _______
was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______
the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______
climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. _______
and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. _______
since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7. _______
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at8. _______
the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _______
the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
at the moment my head touched the pillow.10. ______
答案及解析
1. famous 前加 a。mountain 为可数名词。又是第一次被谈及， 故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。
2. 此行无错。
3. noon 后加 when 。It was about noon 是主句， 后面的应为从句， 故在 noon 后加when， 此处 when 意为“在……时候”。
4. them 改为 us。综观全文可知， 此文是用第一人称的口吻来叙述的。
5. visiting 改为 visited。此处climbed， visited 和 told 构成并列谓语。
6. picture 改为 pictures。
7. passes 改为 passed。应与全文时态一致。
8. 删去 down。
9. and 改为 but。饭菜很贵不是一件令人愉快的事， 而服务质量很高确实是一件好事， 故前后为转折关系。
10. 删去 at。the moment直接引导时间状语从句。