3. 我对这些广告的态度
这是95年1月六级真题。写成三段。起始段可写成两句话,许多不良广告——危害巨大,注意这两句话可以合并成一句。第二段可以从三方面分析危害,首句要写好——其危害可以总结如下。第三段写态度,因为次段已写了危害,这段应该写解决办法。因为这篇文章有两个重要模块(即第二、第三段),可以写得干净利索,只分两个方面。建议段内写成四句话,即总分总的结构,如下:
In my mind, the government and the citizens should join hands to put an end to these false advertisements. On the one hand, the government should punish the advertisers severely lest they harm the customers again. On the other hand, common citizens should report such harmful advertisements as soon as possible. Only by the joint efforts of the government and the common people can we do away with false advertisements.